Wednesday, September 24, 2008

Quinton Rampage Jackson gets caught in a triangle choke from hell. The sweat drips off his eyebrow onto the crude canvas and his opponent's face. He summons strength only achievable through years and years of training to thrust his opponent into the air. Rampage's back ripples as it thrusts a man his same weight up over his head. The opponent is helpless; no control over his body and no means to protect it. Rampage tightens his muscles and begins to swing the 205 pounds back to earth. As Rampage's feet leave the ground, the combined weight of 410 pounds careens down to the canvas while the lights of news cameras flash. The opponent's face is struck with fear as his certain doom finally becomes a reality. The opponent's body tightens to try to brace itself from the neck-breaking slam. His feet are still locked around Rampage's torso. There is no time to release them due to Rampage's quickness. With every muscle in Jackson's body thrusting the weight back to earth, the opponent meets the canvas. A shock wave is let loose immediately upon impact. Gasps of horror erupt over the entire audience. The man is knocked completely unconscious unsurprisingly. Rampage immediately begins raining down blows onto the opponent's face without remorse!

1 comment:

SGirl said...

Great use of description! This blog was very entertaining. I had a lot of fun reading it. My favorite line of the whole blog was "The sweat drips off his eyebrow onto the crude canvas and his opponent's face." I can visual that perfectly. It gives me a perfect image. I think you were a little repetitive like with the word "canvas." Maybe choose a different word... Other then that it was great! Good job!